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So yeah, posting what I have of the chapter. Concentrating on other stuff after.
I'm not continuing the doujinshi.
I'll edit this later to include the page links.
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Manga Studio EX 4.0: lineart, panels, bubbles
Adobe Photoshop CS2: lettering
Approx. time: a few hours (oops copy paste error, this one wasn't 2 y-o sketch!)
Music: Naruto OST (not Shippuden)
Naruto ©Masashi Kishimoto
Naruto NWC concept and characters ©~ikeda
Enjoy!
No self-appropriation or usage without my permission, thank you!
So yeah, posting what I have of the chapter. Concentrating on other stuff after.
I'm not continuing the doujinshi.
I'll edit this later to include the page links.
---
Manga Studio EX 4.0: lineart, panels, bubbles
Adobe Photoshop CS2: lettering
Approx. time: a few hours (oops copy paste error, this one wasn't 2 y-o sketch!)
Music: Naruto OST (not Shippuden)
Naruto ©Masashi Kishimoto
Naruto NWC concept and characters ©~ikeda
Enjoy!
No self-appropriation or usage without my permission, thank you!
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© 2009 - 2024 ikeda
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The action was a little hard to read on this page, though part of that may have been intentional too ("what is she?--oh, she knocked him out"). I know you don't intend to continue this particular story, but this may have come across as stronger if you had shown the girl's face before or after the attack, as opposed to just the guy uninjured:flat on his back. Additional expression probably would have helped.
Actually, what I think would have worked best would have been, if not for an actual panel that showed the action in-progress, to expand perhaps the second panel to show the girl's hand or foot movements to give the audience a better indication of what's about to happen. Stuff for the future, I guess.
Actually, what I think would have worked best would have been, if not for an actual panel that showed the action in-progress, to expand perhaps the second panel to show the girl's hand or foot movements to give the audience a better indication of what's about to happen. Stuff for the future, I guess.